Decadent Dreams (A Foreign Affair Series #1) – Ty Langston

Book Details

Title: Decadent Dreams

Series: A Foreign Affair Series #1

Author: Ty Langston

Publisher: LazyDay Publishing

Published Date: 26 July 2011

ASIN: B005ESF0B2

                                                                                                                                                       

Blurb

Beth Mason seemingly has it all. A successful bakery/café called Decadent Dreams, good friends, and a nice home in Stamford, New York.

After her previous boyfriend dumped her six months before for not spending enough time with him, Beth decided that she had been through enough and wanted more in a relationship. Throwing herself back into the dating scene, Beth decided to go onto an online dating website called, ‘A Foreign Affair.’

Enjoying the different types of men from all over the world that ‘A Foreign Affair’ catered to, Beth became struck by a handsome man from Belarus named Yuri who was the former manager of the famed Rhapsody night club. After realizing that they had a lot in common, the two struck up a close, intense relationship.

Yuri, who’s been depressed since his nightclub burned to the ground and watching his best friend’s parents both die from a terminal illness, decided to take Beth up on an invite and join her for a fun-filled weekend in New York City.

With both of them full of emotions, will the weekend be just what they needed or more than they bargained for?

                                                                                                                                                                                            

Review

Can True Love be found online?

Meet Elizabeth (Beth) Mason. She runs a successful bakery in Stamford, New York call Decedent Dreams.  Beth spends all of her time working at the bakery and has no time to play housewife. This leads to the breakdown of her relationship. Rather than waste her time with another man, Beth decides that she needs a less traditional way to date. She finds ‘A Foreign Affair’ – a website catering to online dating for people living in different countries.

Also looking for love is Yuri, a nightclub manager from Belarus. His best friend and roommate, Nik, has recently lost his father to illness and now his mother has cancer.  Looking to get away from the reality of day to day life, after the nightclub he runs burns down, he too turns to online dating to fill the void left in his life.

To be absolutely honest, I found this book very difficult to read.  The editing process appears to have been skipped all together, with some parts of the text reading like it has been translated from Japanese using Google. The syntax is all over the place, as is the pacing. In some sections entire words have been left out, leaving the reader to assume what the writer was trying to say.

The characters in this story have a lot of potential but no spark.  I can see where the writer was trying to head with them, but it doesn’t feel authentic.  There is no chemistry between the key players or their supporting staff.  I was tempted on several occasions to relegate this book to the Did Not Finish (DNF) pile. This is really unfortunate, because I think with a few more edits and work, the story really could work. It is missing some very key elements though.

The most integral element missing for me is how the story gets to the Happily Ever After (HEA).  It all seems to contrived and there is no organic growth of the characters to get them to the ending point.

Unfortunately, I was really disappointed with this book.  The author has talent, but needs to spend more time on the editing process and solidifying their characterisations and development of narrative.

For more information on Ty Langston, visit her website by  Ty Langston’s Blog

                                                                                                                                                                                           

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This review is part of the KBL First Class  Tour
 

Other Stops on the Tour are:

16/08 – Musings of a Bookworm: Review *giveaway*
31/08 – Skyla: Review 
04/09 – Penny Pimpin
04/09 – KLB Discussion 
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